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Marine Cathedrale WIP by =Jojo-uk:iconJojo-uk:


©2009 =Jojo-uk
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Artist's Comments

I was browsing one night on deviantart when I came across *saraqael gallery. Her picture are very beautiful and I fell in love with this one here: [link]

So I asked her if I try and repaint this photograph for her and she okay with it as long as I give credit. So Thank you for allowing me to repaint this. I haven't had time to actually work on it due to commissions but... Yet I am quite proud of how it is just now.

Critque please! <3

The Orignal Marine Cathedrale (c) :iconsaraqael:
Referance: [link]

Critiques


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It's a great concept, and I'm looking forward to how it shapes up as a whole. The shades are very realistic and beautiful, but I am most shocked by the look of the hair highlights. There are a few jagged edges, but I think it's just the sketch behind it, so I won't mark you down for that.

As for the face, it looks good, but it also looks strangely flat around the tip of the nose, it looks like it should be a bit lighter around there. So far though, it looks very well done, and I look forward to seeing the finish piece.
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Wow, that looks amazing so far. In the thumbnail, I thought it was a photograph. Awesome job, I like how the hair highlights look smooth. I can't wait for the finished piece.

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Wow...! This is fantastic! <3

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odd but neat concept. I almost thought part of it was copied and pasted from some photo.

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